For those of you just tuning in:
This was Alice’s idea, sort of a cross between RRRs and RPGs with a touch of epistolary novel. Here’s how she described it:
Everyone makes up one character (made up, mind you!) and we decide on plot, time, etc. just like usual. Then we start. It would be in the form of letters or e-mails, and we would say at the top of our post who the letter was to.
Everyone would have to read all of the posts, though, to prevent conflicting plot twists, but their character wouldn’t know about whatever the letter said unless it was addressed to them.
Get it?
If not, then phooey. That was hard to explain.
A note to everyone before joining: If you want to join, it is MANDATORY that you read the entire previous thread to understand what the story is about. Then, pick a character and introduce them into the story in a logical way.
Alice – what do you think we should say at the meeting? How are we to talk to Tutankhbastet, who is the equivalent of Saruman in LOTR? (at least that’s how I see him. Anyone agree?)
Cool! So here’s a quick summary, more for my own enjoyment than any necessity:
Tut is threatening to kill everyone in New York City. Rhoda and Luna are on their way to stop him.
Merle and Miriam are in Venice, where the Evil One is.
Dallas has been destroyed.
Everyone except the aforementioned five characters are in the underground Tree Home.
1- Wow, never thought of it that way. The letter form dulls my noticing any already-done plot twists, and PC’s writing style is very different from Tolkein’s. (What a revelation!) But he is, isn’t he? Tut wants us to reveal ourselves so that the Evil One can get rid of us, but I, at least, am already revealed. And you are already dead. Do those things mean we have the upper hand? I still don’t know what we’re going to say. But I am going to try to bring Tut back to the good side, which I do by concentrating REALLY hard.
Graph of current and not-at-all current characters
CURRENT and ACTIVE
Tutankhbastet = Not an Empowered, I don’t think. Currently on the wrong side. (Prarilius Canix)
Lysor = Also not an Empowered. An old friend of Tut’s. (Shadowkat)
Luna = Moonchild = Sensing other Empowered and, with practice, using their own powers against them. A ghost. (Purple Panda)
Merle Linwood = Birdwatcher (e~a, is that right? You never got back to me on that.) = Speaking with birds, flying. (e~a)
Hedge = Duskwolf = A werewolf. (hedgehogboy5)
John Doe = Nightwarrior = The ability to be invisible in darkness, to knock out or kill people with only a touch, and instinctive expertise with weapons. (E2MB)
John Smithsonian = Oldseeker = Knowledge of buried and hidden things, heightened senses, and strange, unpredictable, yet always accurate visions. (Koko du Pelle)
Rubea Hawken = Jewelhawk = Affecting people with a touch (“zapping”) (Traggle)
Miriam = Soulsinger = I’m not sure, and I’m too lazy to go back and check. Refresh my memory, Cinnamoon? (Cinnamon Moon)
Hanjjvar = Raventamer = Almost the same as Merle. (Lord Ragevuire)
Rhoda = Elderseventh = Making something the opposite of what it is. (Alice)
INACTIVE
Maria Grace Green = Greenspeaker = Can speak to any animal or human, out loud or telepathically, and has the power of suggestion. (Green Qween)
Fenn Brown = Not an Empowered. Originally he was going to be haunted by Luna, but it didn’t turn out. (Vendavel)
DOESN”T NEED TO BE ACTIVE
fAZE = Not an Empowered. A mysterious person who sends mysterious messages that only Tutankhbastet can read.
NPCs
Edal = Hedge’s friend.
Well, that was fun.
4- merle isn’t birdwatcher. She didn’t know she could speak with birds until recently. It surprised her and startled her a bit. I mean, wouldn’t you be startled if a bird suddenly spoke to you? She walks on the winds through our world and others. I’d call her Windwalker but she’d rather be called Merle.
Yes we should plot and yes Tut is like Saruman. (did you know that “saurons” is a legitimate French congugation. I think it means we will know.)
5- Great! So Merle is Windwalker. I like that better anyway. I like the name Merle, too. Especially when paired with Linwood.
I want to go with rhoda and wgoever is ging with her to meet tut.
4-Lsyor has a minor Seeking power, though…she can find people according to a certain “invisible” signal they give off…each person has a different one…it’s kinda weird…but that’s how she ended up in the Void: she was trying to find Tut, and she found him, and tried to get to him, and couldn’t, because, little did she know, she was trying to go through a barrier…see?
7-I want to go, too! It would be the perfect plot twist for Tut to actually see Lsyor, and have a little flashback, of sorts, or something…anyway, can I/Lsyor go?
8- Alright. Then I think she’s an Empowered too. I would be perfectly happy if you guys came along. What do you think, PP?
Sure, whoever wants to. But we need to plan…What do you think we should do about this whole …problem…?
Oh drat. I have no idea. I don’t even know what “terms” he wanted to discuss.
I realized there was still stuff I wanted to say right after I hit submit. He doesn’t seem like he would pay much attention to terms. I mean, he’s threatening to kill everyone in NYC if we don’t reveal ourselves. What can we do?
Empowered:
This is your last chance. Come to the Chrysler Building NOW or face consequences.
Dear Tutankhbastet,
We’re on our way to the Chrysler Building. Will you let us know what is in store for us? What is going on?
–Luna
How are we going to have the meeting? Are we just going to write letters to each other, while we’re all in the Chrysler building?
Ack…sorry for the double post. I forgot to write something…
Dear All Empowered,
We need your help getting people out of New York City. We now have a large underground network of tunnels made by the worms and groundhogs. We have a gigantic city made for them, underground, where they can stay until we come to terms with Tutankhbastet. We need help getting all of the people underground, though, so everyone will need to help.
–Luna
Dear Rhoda,
Come to the Chrysler building. I am here, but I cannot find Tutankhbastet. I sense a trap, though I am not afraid, as I cannot be trapped. After he put the block on me last time, I figured out how to repel such traps, and I can just dissolve through them. We are evacuating NYC, but I’m not sure if we can get them all out in time. We must negociate with Tutankhbastet.
–Luna
Great. Is that the end of the planning, then? I’ll write saying we’re coming as soon as someone says that we are.
I have a question. Can I just read this thread and the next one I can join, because by then I will probably get the plot and all… *hopes*
14- I think someone will have to write a letter to someone after the meeting, rather than during. We can play the whole thing out, and then someone can write a letter to someone else recounting the meeting and everything we did. Because it’d be ridiculous to write letters while we’re in the same room.
17- Maybe. How about on the next one you give us a summary and if it’s accurate then you can join. Though by the next one we’ll be even further in and side characters are less likely to be introduced, but whatever.
19-Good idea!!!
All right. Let’s begin the negotiations. Who exactly is in the room with me?
21- Luna, Lysor, Hedge, and Rhoda.
21 – Luna, Rhoda, and Hedge. And Lysor, too, right? But they haven’t all been here, so I’m not sure if we should do full-blown negociations yet. But I’m sure you can state your plans, etc., or whatever you were going to do.
We should also come up with a title for this. Something that would sound cooler than “Role-Playing Writing.” Any ideas?
from: John Doe
to: Luna
re: So he’s at it again?
~Got your letter. Is tutankhbastet going to blow up NYC too? I’ll come as soon as I can, but I need to finish up some buisness work here in Chicago. Though now that I think about it, this seems more important. I’ll hop on the next plane to New York! Gotta go~
23- I am so unable to think of a cool title that I called it simply, “The Empowered” on my Word document. : P
Whoa, my post got zapped. l’ll try to calm down. Anyway, could i join? l’ll be a were- tiger from Sikkhim, lndia on vacation in NY. I have been following this.
Dear Tutankhbastet,
l will arrive at the biulding shortly. Pleese excuse my spelling.
26- Um . . . Are you Empowered? Why do you know about Tutankhbastet? Can you give a bit more back-info?
27- Okay. Tut doesn’t know me, but l know him. I have always had a strange fascination ancient cultures, where l learned of him. When l came to NY, l was delighted to find that he had a form, but not so that he was evil. I am empowered.
26 – Have you read the entire previous thread, and really understand what is going on? How do you know you are Empowered? How did you get Tutankhbastet’s letter? What letter did you get? Can you give a lot more information and show that you really understand what is going on? What is your relationship with the other characters?
I am helping get the population of NYC into the underground home, where they will be safe from Tut. Now, I must write a letter…
Dear all Empowered,
I am helping the population of New York acheive the order necessary to get them all into the underground home. I will head to the Chryseler Building as soon as possible. We will try to discuss terms with Tut and Rhoda will try to turn him back to the good side. As Tut will do everything
wehe can to kill everyone in New York if we don’t reveal ourselves, we will endanger over a million lives if we stay under the Veil (Those of us that aren’t out from it already)30- We? Are you going to go over to the dark side now? *sigh*
So far as I see it, Tut is on the ‘wrong side’ and is trying to do something (blow up, maybe?) to NYC and is currently in the Chryseler Building. Rhoda is with him. The Empowered guys are trying to evacuate NYC through underground tunnels, and convert Tut back to the ‘good side’ to boot. Is that all right for a start?
32- Well, it’s okay, but there’s a lot more to it. For example, we have a bigger goal than converting Tut, and there are lots of different personalities, and lots of us are in different places. I think that if you’re wondering about something you can ask, and we can kind of guide your letters (correct, not dictate) for a while, until you get it fully. But you still need to have a really good way to introduce your character, and you all (you and agagabagabag, so far) need to give lots of back information.
Also, NYC is not going to be blown up. Foxfire (one of Tut’s minions – or is he a minion of the Evil One? Clarification, PC?) has surrounded the whole city in green flame, and I imagine that he’s just goping to burn the place up if we (the Empowered) don’t come out of the Veil, which is a magic thing that keeps us hidden from the Evil One until we use our powers. So far Rhoda (also known as Elderseventh, played by me) is the only one that has come out of the Veil.
Now go read the first several posts of the first thread until you know all the characters. Or is that being cruel?
Hedge-
I have met your friend in London. It took a lot of energy, but I have healed him. We are now both on a plane back to the US. Please update me on what has happened and how your friend will be of use as soon as you can.
Rubea
Should Rubea go to the Chrysler Bulding? Or should she stay away in case Tut is just luring the Empowered into a trap?
34- I think as few Empowered as possible were coming, but really it depends on how much you want to come. If you don’t care much, stay away. If you care a lot, come, by all means.
Oh, and Purple Panda, do you think that Beavo’s summary was good enough? (Post 32.)
35- I/ Rubea cares enough to want to kill Tut.
To all Empowered,
I will be joining Hedge, Rhoda, Luna, and Lysor. I need to be there to help with negotiations, and hopefully find out why he’s doing all of this, and why he killed Codi. Revenge will come after explanations.
Rubea
oh, and ‘he’ in my last post means Tut.
37- Don’t kill Tut!
No, I’m not back yet, just catching up on my c&p.
*A NOTE TO EVERYONE WANTING TO JOIN*
This isn’t like an RRR, where you can just jump in anytime, etc. Every character plays a critical role in the story-line, so if you don’t introduce your character well, or understand everything, it will ruin the whole thing. So please, before joining, read the previous thread. Personally, I think it is essential to read the entire thing, but if you read a lot of it and think you’ve got it, you can give a summary and make sure you don’t miss anything. I don’t think any of us are trying to be mean here, but if you don’t know what’s going on and you jump in, everything could go haywire. You should know who all of the characters are, and what role they play (because you will be writing letters to them).
But I just got a new idea: If two new characters want to team up and write letters to each other, you can start a new sub-plot or something. But still, you need to understand what is going on.
Did that seem to mean? I didn’t mean it to…
40- THANK YOU! I’ve been wanting to say that but I didn’t want to sound all private and . . . I think the word is clique-ish. You said it very well, PP, and it didn’t sound mean at all. I like your idea, too. Beavo and agagabagabag could write letters to each other.
Um agagabag can you not be a were creature and have other powers if you join?
so im coming and if tut trys to kill us and all and if rhoda cantv do it… can I eat him?
Lsyor is at the Chrysler Building…she’s using her Seeking power to find Tut…but she can’t…he’s behind some sort of shield…urgh.
42- No! And why are you misspellng my name? Say it with me; its agagabagabag! Jeez! And what’s with your grammar?
45-Well, see, if you’re a were-creature, you’re kind of copying hedgehogboy5’s idea…you could be part tiger, or something, and have crazy-good night vision, or something, and even camouflage powers…what do you think?
Yeah, I agree with Shadowkat.
I agree with Shadowkat.
Oh, and agagabagabag – you did this on the Pie Isle thread, and messed it up. If you do it here too, we’re kicking you off. Not to be mean or anything, but you’re just jumping in without considering those of us who really care about this.
agagabagabag, you need to give lots more information if you’re really going to do this. For one thing, you, not being at the tree home, would not have received the letter to the Empowered, and would therefore not be coming to the Chrysler Building. We need to know who your correspondents are, where you come from, what is your background, etc. Same goes for you, Beavo. And you also need to read the previous thread.
Seems like we’re going to spend most of our time talking about the conditions of new people joining. PC, what were the terms you wanted to discuss, exactly?
50- I will reveal that when you get here.
Foxfire is one of my minions. Even though you guys are more powerful than he is, he’s much more experienced, so there’s no way you’ll get through the wall.
Let’s start the talk. I lifted my shield so that Lsyor can find me.
“Ah, Hedge. How’s your friend doing? On the verge of death, I presume. Or would be, had Jewelhawk not intervened. How does it make you feel to know that below that facade of civilization, you’re a bloodthirsty freak?
And Luna. You won’t be around much longer. The Crystal has already cracked. Once it splits in half, the Empowered’s disembodied souls will be sucked across to Otherlife.
Elderseventh, if you try any of your switching tricks on me, I’ll signal Foxfire, and he’ll create such a massive tremor that that warren of tunnels beneath New York will collapse.”
I avoid Lsyor’s eyes, and don’t speak to her.
“Now, let’s get down to business. Are you willing to join me?”
I spit at tut and say
“Oh, yes and you are so bloodthirsty for control over us that you want to destroy NYC just to get us.”
I wipe the saliva off. My eyes harden.
“That was a mistake, Duskwolf. I’ll take that as a no. What about the rest of you?”
I can’t use the switching trick? Uh-oh.
“No, I’m not.”
“Like I said, no!”
Heheh. This is like Muse RPG. I sure hope it doesn’t get that confusing.
“I can’t beleive a highly respected Ejgyptian god could get so corrupted. I can’t beleive I ever thought of you as an idol when you were always planning to kill us. But i still thank you as for doing your part in the profecie gathering us. I enjoy being with the other empowered and if it is needed I will enjoy killing you.
I turn to Hedge. “It is mutual. I will certainly enjoy killing you.”
I interject. “Where you always planning to kill us? From the very start?”
from: John doe
to: all empowered meeting Tutankhbastet
re: I’ll be there in a minute
~I’m running over right now. I expect to be there in about 2 minutes. I hope I’m not too late.~
I make myself slightly visible, and turn to Tut “I’m sorry Tut. You cannot suck our souls anywhere. We have protection underground, with dirt, and there is nothing you can do to break that protection. We are safe from all evil. And we’re not underground, you say? Well that does not stop us from coming prepared.” I pull out a bag of dirt, and give some dirt to everyone at the meeting. “But anyway, Tutankhbastet, what did you want to talk about?”
“I already talked about it. Join me or everyone in New York dies. Including the people in the tunnels. Just because we can’t affect anything underground doesn’t mean we can’t collapse the tunnels from above ground.
And speaking of which, Luna, the Crystal is the very essence of earth. If it breaks, ground loses its ultimate protection, and the Empowered will no longer linger on Earth as ghosts, but be pulled to Otherlife like the rest of humanity.
I’ll give you one last chance. Will you join me?”
I break in, eyes glittering. “Tut, how could you?! I came to visit my friend, not my enemy! And that’s what you’ve become…my enemy.” I collapse in a fit of sobs, not being able to look at Tut.
I hesitate, and hope Tut isn’t just bluffing. “I . . . yes.”
Note: I AM NOT A TRAITOR! I am going to try to bring him down from the inside, because that’s the best way to go, if he isn’t bluffing. If he is bluffing, it’s still the best way to go. It’s also a good plot twist.
Oh, and whats more, everyone can think I’ve betrayed them, and there can be much accusation and drama while I try to convince them that I’m not trying to destroy them.
I turn on Rhoda. “*gasp* Rhoda, how could you?! I trusted you!”
I laugh at Tutankhbastet. “Oh, please, Tutankhbastet. You undersestimate the power of the Empowered. Evil has its powers, and so does good. All of nature has taken our side, and they are much stronger than you think. You cannot collapse the tunnels: magic protects them, and it is stonger than you could ever imagine. Now, almost the entire city of New York is in these tunnels, and they are being trained to fight evil. All you are doing is breeding a larger army – for your opponents. And you alone do not have the power to destroy the crystal. We have the lightning bugs currently working on repairs, but why would you want the Crystal destroyed? You would die as well. What is going on here?”
PraCan – let’s wait until Alice comes and posts something before too much happens. I don’t want her to miss anything crucial…
MIriam- We must aid those in New York confrencing with Tut. This is most likely the best time to aid them.
-Merle
66- I’m here.
“Lysor, I can’t do anything else! It is the only option!”
I run up, panting.
I’m here. What’s happening?
33-Thank you. I did read that post that introduced characters on this thread. I have thought of a name, and background stuff, but I’m not going to introduce him/it until I get the story completely.
40-I don’t think you’re being mean, I understand what you and Alice are saying. I had a primative blog kind of like this thread and people kept coming in and saying “Hi! My name is George of the Jungle and I’m the master of flying zombie monkies” and join the story. It eventually became a completely random series of events.
I probably shouldn’t answer that, since I am the “betrayer”, even though I’m not.
“Where is Foxfire?, Tutanchbasket.”
Sorry for the 2p. No program on this darn computor is working today accept internet and now it’s hitting “submit” before I end my post. *is aggravated*
41-Letters? I’m confused.
70- Yeah. I’m glad you understand. So far this has remained on track and relatively un-confusing, and I’d like to keep it that way, so thanks for understanding.
Dangit, it did it again. I only have one more thing to say.
I’m reading all the new posts as the story progresses. I suggest every week or so I give a short summary of what’s happining from my standpoint and Alice & Friends can correct me if I’m wrong about something, but not dictate. Actually, it’s kind of fun trying to figure out what’s happining. It’s like reading a sequel without reading the first book.
I hesitate. For a moment, I seem about to speak to Lsyor, then I turn away.
“It is you who underestimate us, Moonchild. I may not have the power to destroy the Crystal alone, but I’m not alone. Three of the Eight Worlds have fallen under the sway of the Corrupt Empowered, and a fourth is heavily embattled. I lead only the advance force for the conquest of Earth. If we conquer four, we will be equal to the so-called Pure Empowered. But that point is moot, since Elderseventh is now on my side.
Ah, Nightwarrior. You’re too late. One of the most powerful in your ranks has come to see my point of view. Elderseventh! Repeat after me: I swear by the Hand of Set and Loki’s Flame that I will faithfully serve Tutankhbastet and the Evil One until my soul is extinguished.”
73- That, Beavo, is a sign that you don’t know this story very deeply. The whole thing has been written in letters.
I turn pale. “Swear? I have to swear? I – I – fine.
“I swear by the Hand of Set and Loki’s Flame that I will faithfully serve Tutankhbastet until my soul is extinguished.”
Note: It’s not an accident that I left out the Evil One.
“Rhoda, dont do it!”
(Rhoda winks at me if thats ok but noone else sees it other than me)
Suddenly there is a humongous bang and a burning smell.
I mutter “Edal, you have truly outdone yourself this time.”
(If Foxfire is inside a building near something electrical it just burst inrto flame probably because Edal shortcircuted the electricity in NYC through the computers.)
78- No offense, but I’m not the winking type. I’m trying to say it through my words, but no one has picked up on it yet, or if they have the haven’t said anything.
77-I know all the posts are written like characters writing letters to eachother, but I don’t get what you mean by agagbagbag and I writing letters if we’re not involved in the story yet. Do you mean we write letters as if we’re, say, someone in NYC wittnessing the events, or actually characters that only correspond with eachother, or….?
Dear Rhoda,
If what you are doing is what I think you are, then you’re all set. I am going to “give in” as well. I will still be on the “good” side, but I will pretend to be on the side of Tutankhbastet and the Evil One. It may be helpful to know what the bad side is doing…
–Luna
Dear All Empowered:
Enclosed is a letter, about a plan. I hope it works
[[see above letter]]
–Luna
“Okay, Tutankhbastet. I will join your side. Now please extinguish the flames around New York.”
77- I’m glad you did, because eventually the good in Tutankhbastet will order you to switch the rest of him.
I smile. “Excellent. Elderseventh, would you mind switching ground and sky inside Foxfire’s-”
I look out the window to see that New York is no longer surrounded, due to the fact that Foxfire is dead, and let out an Egyptian curse.
“-what used to be inside Foxfire’s wall? It’s more difficult than what you’ve done previously, but you have more than enough power.”
I look at Rhoda for a moment, then comprehension dawns on my face…a little. “Well, I will not join you, Tutankhbastet, but I will not hurt you, either. Leave me out of this…I’m going home, where my friends are still my friends…I hope!” I begin to step into my mirror.
Note: I am speaking to Tut’s inner self, right now, the part that’s not evil.
Dear Luna,
Yes, you’re right. I was frightened when I heard that I would have to swear, but Tutankhbastet didn’t seem to notice that I failed to swear to obey the Evil One. I’m glad you’re here too.
– Rhoda
“Will that destroy the city?” I ask.
80- Never mind. I meant corresponding to each other, but it’s better that you just watch for a while.
84-Okay…. *watches*
“No, the city will be fine.” I turn to Nightwarrior and Duskwolf. “You may want to get people out of the deeper tunnels, though.”
A tattoo of a black hand with a golden flame in its palm appears on Elderseventh’s forehead.
I concentrate. It is very, very hard. As you watch, the view from the window shivers, and suddenly the building is upside down. I sit down heavily on the ceiling.
Right, is it time to go back to writing letters now?
Well, wait, I don’t think so, because we still don’t know the point of this whole exercise…
All right. I’m going to write a letter to my parents sometime, though, because I had to go even though they wouldn’t let me, and they’re bound to be worried.
Technicalities aren’t a very big part of this, but it’s implausible that they would let a fourteen-year-old girl go overseas with money sent by a total stranger, so naturally he had to run away. This is the note she left pinned on her pillow:
Dear Mom, Dad, and all the kids,
It’s very, very important that I go to America, much more important than you could comprehend. Therefore I am going, with or without your blessing. Don’t worry, I’m sure that I’ll be fine. I have friends there that will make sure no harm comes to me.
– Rhoda
I’m a bit confused. What is going on now? Maybe we should map out where everyone is, and what they’re doing.
Who is underground?
Who came to the Chrysler Building?
Who is pretending to be bad?
The windows are suddenly filled with a view of dirt and rocks. Rhoda, Luna and I are catapulted through the floor and out into a very strange place. It appears to be a cave with a high, domed ceiling, and clouds floating past the ceiling. The people who were in the underground tunnels are now sprawled on the floor. “Excellent, Elderseventh. If the Empowered can get out of that, I’ll begin to respect them. Let me explain what’s happened. In the meantime, we’re fleeing to the Sahara Desert.” I begin digging at the wall of the cave to make a tunnel. Immediately after I enter the tunnel, gravity seems to switch around, and I land on the ceiling. “Come, Elderseventh, Moonchild. There is now a massive dome of earth and rock encasing the buildings of New York City, and a huge cave below it, containing everything that used to be underground. Gravity has switched in both those places.
Now, I’ll tell you my plan…”
Suddenly a raven lands on the window — sill and cocks its head against the window. Only Hedge sees it and knows I’m listening.
93- To get to the windowsill, you’d have to fly through a hundred feet of compressed soil and rock.
92 – wait…but the evil people can’t collapse or do anything to the underground, so that’s not possible…
91- Luna, Tut, Hedge, and Rhoda are in the Chrysler Building. Lysor stepped into her mirror, so she’s who knows where. Everyone except the aforementioned and Miriam and Merle (who are in Venice) are underground, along with most of the population of New York. Luna and Rhoda are pretending to be bad.
I feel the letter form slipping away. Maybe Tut should finish with his plan, and then we’ll write some more letters.
95- But I can, and I am on the bad side now. (Or so Tut thinks.)
96- Well, if they were underground, they are now in the cave.
fAZE time!!!!
Angalel fomera ashonni. Canleh, moaka opema ka lo, niaka. Lepeero, kanjal! Kanjal opek lo nia! Komae, poer maneea jon, kal onore helai. Latres talek lo pawlake. Moresa!
rough translation: this is not a good idea. beware of kanjal, by the way.
I send the fAZE letter to Hanjjvar with the raven and tell Hanjvar I am going under. I transform and tunnel through the dirt trying to find some sort of opening.
After whaat fells like days of tunneling, I fall into a cave and see a tunnel. I continue down it at impressive speeds.
ARGH! Can we write letters yet? This is making me nervous, and I don’t want to just start Role-playing, and abandon the writing part.
To save time, I want someone to tell me what’s going on?
Merle,
I agree with you. I’m not sure how we can help though. I still think that we should stay here, and try and find the Evil One. I sensed some presence of evil when I was walking past a small tourist shop. I went inside, and found a very creepy atmosphere. No one was there at all, and no one outside the building seemed to see it. I think that the evil one might be here.
Miriam.
WHAT IS GOING ON?????? [and so on like that…your point is made. –Rebecca]

105- Why don’t you just read the threads? You haven’t been gone that long.
I emerge in Egypt and suddenly get strengthened and feel great as i soak in the light of the full moon. The Duskwolf roams new land tonight!
Great. My brother hogs the computer for a day and I miss the most important part of the story. So, am I still part of the story?
Let’s start writing letters again.
Master,
I have bent Moonchild and Elderseventh to my will. We will soon be able to break the Crystal. I trust you are doing well in your conquest of Planet X.
As a favor to your faithful servant, will you spare a certain Empowered known as LsyWe are in Egypt now, and going quickly to the stronghold of Corrupt Empowered in the Sahara.Tutankhbastet
course u are
108- Of course. We have erased no one, in case they want to come back. Except maybe Fenn Brown, since he wrote one letter a million years ago. Now can we write letters again?
Miriam,
I agree. I have been past the tourist shop you have mentioned once or twice as I usually try to avoid it due to the creepy sensation it gives me. I think we should investigate it. Maybe if we defeat the evil one or weaken it/him/her, Tut will return to being good. Do you know of anyone who would be free to come here and aid us?
-Merle
Dear everyone in the Tree Home,
I apologize for the change of scenery. I had to switch earth and sky to show Tutankhbastet that I really was on his side. I have pretended to give in, and have sworn to his service, but I think that it will be easier to bring him back from this side than that. Luna has done the same. Lysor has gone back to Planet X. She does not want to be a part of this, I do not think. But she is an Empowered! We must get her back.
– Rhoda
Dear Lysor,
I am sorry to have led you to believe that I was under Tutankhbastet’s grip. There was nothing else I could do, but I assure you, it was all a ruse – almost. I have indeed sworn myself to the service of Tutankhbastet, but I have not sworn to do the bidding of the Evil One, and soon Tutankhbastet will back on our side, if all goes well. Please return! We need all of the Empowered, are you are one of them. I know it pains you to see Tutankhbastet this way, but soon he will be converted; then will you return?
– Rhoda
To all Empowered,
I’m sorry I could not make it to NYC before negotiations started. After I did make it there, Hedge’s friend said he had a plan, and left me, and I left the city to go to an undiclosed locatioin where I could meditate, and hone my killing skills. If I could hear from everyone to know that they are safe and know whther I am needed, that would be good.
Rubea
Dear Edal,
On a night travel through the egyptian landscape I found a recently uncovered by a sandstorm wall of some anchient building. This was inscribed on it:´¡£œ´∑ßç†√∫∆†˙∆†®¥©∆∑ƒ√˜∫∆˚˜®µ†˜∫∆√˙˙∆√´∫´¨˚¨˚√
please find a way to decode it.
-hedge
Dear Hedge
I decoded some of it it. a rough translation is:
Nightdog and Birdteacher meet the cat triangle moon
I think it has to do with you and Raventamer.
I doubt we’re going to be able to switch around Tutankhbastet, because it seems like PraCan is liking his evilness. PraCan, are you ever going to be good again, or should us Empowered people keep trying? I have the feeling his end will be just like Saruman’s end in LOTR. That is, if he keeps being bad.
Dear Rhoda,
What should we do now? I have been floating around thinking for some time, but I don’t know what to do. I do not understand why Tutankhbastet wants to crack the crystal – it would kill him too!
–Luna
Dear Hedge,
Could you train the Empowered? Help them with their powers. I have the feeling a big war may go on soon.
–Luna
116- I am enjoying being evil. As soon as there’s a big, climactic battle, though, I’ll switch over. That will be the most dramatic and narratively satisfying moment.
And cracking the Crystal wouldn’t kill me, because I have a corporeal body, and only disembodied spirits and ghosts (like Luna) will be sucked across to Otherlife. And I’m immortal, so I won’t become a ghost unless someone kills me, which is close to impossible now that I have two of the most potent Empowered on my side. Or so I think.
Master,
We have reached the ancient shrine to Set, your embodiment in our last attempt to conquer Egypt. The Corrupt Empowered there are:
Drakesinger, who can transform sound into heat and light
Sunsnuffer, who can create utter darkness
Madspin, who breaks minds
Lightfinger, the greatest thief in history
Flyworm, who controls insects
But Foxfire’s spirit is not here, as it should be, and that worries me.
We will go to the Moon immediately. Moonchild will be able to deceive the Man into revealing the Crystal, and then Elderseventh, Drakesinger and I will break it.
Tutankhbastet
Note: The spirit of Foxfire, knowing that he will be destroyed if the Crystal breaks, has gone over to the good side again. One of the Empowered should meet him and write about it.
Dangit! I forget to come here for two days and look what happens!
116- Well, to quote him in answer to me leaving out serving the Evil One in the oath, “I’m glad you did, because eventually the good in Tutankhbastet will order you to switch the rest of him.” So I think he’s planning to stop being evil eventually. But when?
Dear Luna,
Would it? Is he Empowered? We don’t know. He could be merely a courier of sorts, to tell of us our mission. Or the Evil One could have promised to spare him, with or without the intention of actually doing so.
– Rhoda
From: *~Lsyor~*
To: Rhoda
Re: My home is being taken over, as well!!!
-Oh, Rhoda, I’m sorry I ever came back home! The Evil One is corrupting X, as well as Earth! I have to apologize to you for making it seem as though I didn’t care about what happened on Earth…I just couldn’t bear to see Tut like that. I’ll come back, but I won’t be with you, alright? I’m going to find the Crystal. See you soon, and best of luck in your endeavors!-
Actually, looking back, it’s been less than a freakin’ day since I’ve been here! This story moves too darn fast!
121- Yeah, the first part was still on the main page when it had 345 comments.
It’s cool.
Weird. The GAPAs have been snippety-snipping a lot of my posts lately.
Oh wait, now I see. It’s post 118. Weird how there were three posts all within 1 minute of each other.
whats the moon? ios cthat what the codec was talking about not the moon in the sky or is the crystal on the moon?
The Crystal is the moon. It was originally in the Earth’s crust, but Empowered from Planet X steered a planetesimal into Earth while it was still molten. The Crystal was blown out, along with a lot of debris, which eventually settled on the Crystal and cooled. The resulting celestial body began orbiting Earth, and the Empowered animated its rocky crust. If magic touches the Moon’s surface, the face (the man in the moon) will come to life. An Empowered can convince the face to reveal the Crystal. The crust will then crack and fall off, revealing a massive dodecahedral topaz. This is the Crystal.
126- Sweet.
Uh, GAPAs, why did you zap my post? A letter from Foxfire? I don’t see any reason to zap it.
Why start writing letters from Foxfire? Foxfire isn’t- Oh I see. No, you weren’t supposed to write a letter FROM foxfire, you were supposed to write about MEETING Foxfire. Though i doubt that is why the GAPAs zapped it.
And who knows? It might have been WordPress eating comments again.
Dear Hedge,
I do not know if this will reach you, as I am trapped in a cavern which was originaly had a pool filled with the most facinating fish. Please help find me. I am not sure this mole is reliable, so send your next message by something else. You might be able to speak to animals, when you are in your wolf form.((Note: this letter is bieng sent by mole))
~Hanjjvar
I dont want you guys killing the mooon! thATS where i get my magic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I H8 U!
129-I thought it might be okay… But you’re right. Okay, PC, what are Foxfire’s powers? I will meet him after you supply his powers.
From: *~Lsyor~*
To: All Empowered (except those with Tut)
Re: The Crystal
-Friends, I come before you asking for help. Earth is not the only planet under attack…my home, X, is also being overtaken by the Evil One. It is my current mission to find the Crystal before he does, and somehow use it to destroy him. But, I cannot do it alone…I need you all to help me, if you will. I can get to those caverns, I think. Just give me a description of what they look like, and I’ll be right down. We’ll decide what to do from there…that is, if you agree to help me. Please let me know, someone, and I’ll come. Until then, best wishes!-
I’m replying to Lysor’s letter to Rhoda.
Dear Lysor,
We too are going to find the Crystal. It is in the Moon, and if we really succeed in getting it out – Tutankhbastet would think of it as success, at least, but I have no desire to destroy the Moon – I am worried what will happen to Hedge. All his power comes from the Moon. And Luna. She must be called Moonchild for some reason.
I am sorry for what is happening to X. It is grave news. If we defeat the Evil One and restore the Crystal, everything will go back to normal – I hope. If a prophecy is made that says we will win in the end, will it come true? Or can it be changed at the last moment? I am worried.
– Rhoda
Dear Lysor,
I will help you in any way I can to find the Crystal and destroy the Evil One. I hope that the Crystal can reverse the damage that has happened on both our worlds. Now is the time for me to use my secret weapon. It is a willow bow that was made by one of my ancestors in the Middle Ages. It also comes with special arrows that are tipped with a deadly poison and will burst into flame if lit. I am sure this will be useful should we have to fight Tut for the Crystal. Please tell me if any other Empowered agree to help us.
Rubea
132- Foxfire can conjure up massive amounts of silvery-green flame which cannot be quenched with water.
I dont want moon blown up thats bad
I think ill get crazy powerful if i go on the moon. Then i can fight tut so thertes an epic battle and he can turn good.
Hey guys, don’t mean to be picky, but, um…it’s Lsyor…not Lys.
137-Lol…now, don’t do anything just to rush the story, boy-with-the-same-birthday-as-me…make it logical, and put limits on yourself…otherwise no one will like what you do, because it will seem so far-fetched…look at Superman. He was indestructible, and, therefore, boring.
138- Oh, oops. Darn brain. It always rearranges thing like that. Well, not always, but because Lysor is easier to pronounce than Lsyor, my brain automatically changes it to fit. Sorry.
but if I do get on the moon shouldnt i get super powerful. but i dont nknow how to get to moon
Alice, my weekly summary is due on Sunday, correct?
141- Uh, yeah, I guess so. *doesn’t remember about weekly summaries* I guess I’d better refresh my memory, hadn’t I? And I think you need to start including characters in your weekly summaries because this is a very character-oriented book. Story. Book. Whatever it is.
Sunday . . .
Ugh. Double post.
140- Maybe there should be something that stops you from getting on the moon, or else when you get on the moon the opposite happens and you get really weak, or something, because that would be boring if you got all powerful. And you never said that you were on Tut’s side, so you wouldn’t be coming, would you?
Dear Hedge,
searching the web i found deep in the ‘net something menbtioning the empowered and the man on the moon hiding a crystal inside the moon. whta do you think of it?
-Edal
Dear Rhoda,
inclosed is a letter from Edal. did Tut say anything about something liike that?
-Hedge
Dear Hedge,
Not to me, but he does not disclose much information to me.
– Rhoda
rhoda you sent lsyor something talking about it!
But it would be so awesome if i got eallly strong.
and the profecie I found that Edal decoded says that we will meet with tut on the moon standing in a tgriangle
146- What? Oh drat. Sorry, I forgot. I’ll redo my letter. Sorry.
Dear Hedge,
Yes. We are going to the Moon to retrieve the Crystal, which I gather is actually inside the Moon. Tutankhbastet plans to break the Moon, I know, but if we do, what will happen to you? And what of Luna’s name, Moonchild? Do you think she would be affected if the Moon broke? Or could it be that you get your power not from the Moon, but from the Crystal, inside the Moon?
– Rhoda
142-How about first a character discription and who each is played by, and then a short summary so I get ‘almost’ everything in.
148- Alright.
From:John Smithsonian
To:Lsyor (First time I got it right!)
Re:The cystal
[Insert description of caverns here] I will wait for you in the caverns. I am sorry to hear that X is being taken over as well. Do you know where the Crystal is? If I am correct it is on the moon. We’ll figure out how to get there when we meet. I don’t know where Rhoda is, so please contact her for me. Ask her the whereabouts of the crystal, as I am not sure it is actually on the moon. Ask her where she is, too. And there is something she, and everyone, barring Tut of course, should know. I have met a “corrupt” Empowered named Foxfire- they should reckognize the name. He surrounded NYC with a wall of flame-as a matter of fact, that’s his power- creating flame. He can also extinguish his flame, or any fire, but there is no other way to quench his flame. It was startling when he made himself visible. After he introduced himself, I tried to run away, but he surrounded me with a wall of flame that trapped me in place. He filled me in on everything that had happened that I missed, including his own conversion to good, and what happened at the meeting in the Chryseler Building. I was shocked to discover that Rhoda had apparently turned evil. I have to stop now, as I have the feeling I’m being watched. Over.
Alice – I know Hedge’s letter wasn’t to me, but it seemed like you were talking to me about Moonchild (using “you”). Maybe my name should mean I am connected with the Moon in some way. That might help me be able to keep it away from Tutankhbastet…I’m not sure. Maybe it has some shield around it that he doesn’t know about. What do you think?
did anyone do anything about andrew hampton?
151- That sounds good!
152- What? Andrew Hampton?
Merle,
I will right to Rhoda, as she may know of someone who is free. I realise that we are in a bad postion here though. The greatest danger may be here, but there are only two of us! In my last letter, I mentioned that no one else seemed to see the shop. Perhaps this means something? Since you have seen it too, maybe only empowered and those working for the evil one can see it? I’m afraid that I don’t really know what is going on in America or where ever else the empowered may be right now. I am assuming that we both recieve the letters sent to “All Empowered”, but there hasn’t been one in a long time. It is also possible that some have been lost somehow, as we don’t have the best of connections to the others. If we recieve no answer from Rhoda within a couple days, then we will plan our next move. Agreed?
Miriam.
Rhoda,
I and Merle Linwood are in Venice at the moment. We have sensed the presense of the evil one, and believe that if we can weaken him, it will go easier for you with Tutankhbaset. Do you know of anyone who can aid us in this task? Our powers may not be enough. Mine are only of the soul, and are generally healing. I don’t know if I can use them for attack. Merle’s are with birds. If no one can aid us, then we will try alone, but I warn you, this may not be good. I am a spirit of sorts. I was snatched from my life in Egypt years ago, and have remained suspended in time. I have not aged since then, and I am only about thirteen. I don’t know Merle’s age. Do not expect much of us.
Miriam.
Can I just say, I might be affected if the crystal cracks. I’m not sure. I’ll see what works out best later.
Dear Rhoda,
I think It may be both. But I am pretty sure I will either die or lose my powers if the crystal is destroyed.
-Hedge
I think that i have connection with the man on the moon and the crystal
Dear Miriam,
I shall ask some Empowered in the Tree Home to go to your aid.
Luna and I are currently with Tutankhbastet, in Egypt. We are pretending to be on his side, but we aren’t really. Most everyone else is in New York, I think. Once again, I will write to them, and I suggest that you do the same.
– Rhoda
Dear All Empowered,
Where is everyone? By that I mean, who is where? If possible, someone should go to Venice to help two of the Empowered, Merle Linwood and Miriam. The Evil One is there, and they cannot defeat it by themselves.
Luna and I are in Egypt.
– Rhoda
Dear Rhoda,
Acccording to Foxfire, you have (apparently) joined Tut. Is this true, or are you just faking? I was told (by Foxfire) that you seemed hesitant to swear alleigence to Tut, and you left out the Evil One. I enclose a printed out copy of a message I sent to Lsyor. (Comment 150) Do not let Tut see it. I, meanwhile, do not know whether to join Merle and Miriam in Venice, or to join you and Luna in Egypt. I think I will go to Venice untill I get your reply, and then I will join you in Egypt. I am worried that I won’t be much help in battle, as I don’t seem to be able to attack with my powers. Please tell the truth about your REAL side in your reply.
-John Smithsonian If it’s okay with PC, I would like to, at some point, discover that I have the ability to detect lies.
Darn. WordPress ate my comment.
Dear John Smithsonian,
I haven’t really joined. I had to pretend, as there seemed no other way out, but I did leave out the Evil One. Luna is also pretending to be on Tutankhbastet’s side.
By all means, stay in Venice! I believe they may need your help. I intend to go there as soon as I am done with this business of the Crystal.
I am glad Foxfire has come over to our side, but I worry. It is hard to trust someone who converted so quickly and conveniently. Watch him closely.
– Rhoda
Wait…I thought Foxfire was dead…this is confusing…
161- Well, he wasn’t dead, he just converted. And yeah, it is confusing. That’s why I wanted everyone to say where they were. I think it goes like this:
Venice:
Merle
Miriam
Egypt:
Tutankhbastet
Luna
Rhoda
Corrupt Empowered
The Tree Home:
Rubea
John Doe
John Smithsonian
Foxfire
Edal (Hedge’s friend)
Uncertain:
Hedge
Hanjjvar
X:
Lsyor (or at least till she says otherwise)
Did I leave anyone out?
162- Rubea never reached the Tree Home(see post 114). I don’t know where Rubea is. Yes, I know that’s wierd, but I don’t.
163- Oh, right. I forgot.
Foxfire was dead, it’s his spirit you were talking with.
Thanks for the list, Alice!
PraCan and Alice – what exactly are we doing in Egypt, and what is our current goal(s)? I’m still a bit confused with the situation.
And it seems like this thread is dying a bit. Are there necessary characters who haven’t shown up in awhile – that we should “bring back,”? (does that make any sense?)
Our current goal is to reach the Moon and destroy the Crystal by smashing it into the Earth’s surface.
from: John Doe
to: the good empowered
re: I’m lost….
~Work has been so busy I have gotten totally behind on helping you. Can somebody give me a summary of what has been going on?~
166- What do you mean, “bring back”? The only ones who’ve really disappeared are Maria Grace Green and Fenn Brown. Certain people could stand to start writing letters again, but I still don’t really get your drift.
From:John Smithsonian
To:John Doe
re:re:I’m lost
Rhoda and Luna are in Egypt with Tut, and pretending to be on his side, but aren’t really. Their goal is to reach the Moon and destroy the Crystal, which will destroy us all. Merle and Miriam and I are in Venice, as I have joined them. Neither of them is in the same hotel as I am, as I thought we would be safer seperate, so I made sure they weren’t in the hotel I checked into. I don’t know whether Merle and Miriam are in the same hotel with each other or not.
We are together. We came back together, so that means we must have stayed together. Could someone please write and tell us that Oldseeker is here? If we don’t know, then we’ll have to plan an attack on our own.
To any good Empowered,
I need to know if any of you will help me fight Tut. We cannot let him destroy the crystal, or even get to the Crystal, which he might use for his own evil purposes. The Empowered were divided when the tratiors left us, now I need to know, which side are you on? Meet me in Ireland if you will join me.
Rubea
Dan, ( the good empowered can also read this if necessary),
It has been a long time since I’ve been able to write to you instead of calling you. For once, I know this letter will not be intercepted.You know what’s going on with the Crystal, Tut, Rhoda and Luna. I know that Rhoda and Luna are not actually helping Tut, but I don’t think their plan will work. I don not think Tut can be turned back to our side. I am heading back home and I have asked the other good Empowered to join me. We will come up with a plan, I’m sure, and we will stop Tut in any way we can. You are welcome to join us if you want to.
Rubea
Dear Miriam and Merle,
I have written to the other Empowered and asked them to help you. John Smithsonian (Oldseeker) has said that he was going to Venice. I do not know if he has gone, or if he has not yet arrived. Look for him.
– Rhoda
Actually, in the letter to Dan, the other Empowered shouldn’t be able to read it. My mistake.
Dear Rubea,
I am still on your side, but I am in Egypt and cannot come to Ireland yet. I do not think that we should fight Tutankhbastet, at least not until I have tried one more time to turn him back. Let me try once more, and if that fails, then you may fight him. I know you are bitter about Codi, but Tutankhbastet was under the spell of the Evil One when he killed him. I am not sure if we can fulfill the prophecy without Tutankhbastet, or you, and if you fight and one of you is killed, none of us will survive for long. Please, PLEASE, don’t do anything rash, Rubea.
– Rhoda
Master,
Drakesinger has conjured up a chariot of light that is taking us towards the Moon. Moonchild will speak the words, and the Man will open the Crystal. Flyworm has dispelled the lightning bugs. We will succeed.
Tutankhbastet.
169 (Alice) – I meant that some MuseBloggers who had important characters haven’t been here for awhile. But it seems to be okay.
Dear Rubea, (And All Other Empowered):
Fighting Tut will not work. He has too much power, and many of the good Empowered are too unexperienced to survive. They, along with you, must be trained before any fighting can be done. And still, that is the last resort. We must use our powers of thought and logic to defeat them, not violence. We will not let him destroy the Crystal. I have been working on mending it during the past few days, and he has not even noticed. Since I am a ghost I can slip away occasionally unnoticed, and I have already manded a significant part of the crack in the Crystal. I have a stong connection with it, so that helps me fix it, and will give me strong powers when he tries to destroy it. Do not go to Ireland. Stay safe, in the underground tunnels in America. If you must, have the worms and other underground animals make you some caves and tunnels in Ireland, but do not go anywhere above ground. You will weaken the veil and be in much greater danger.
–Luna
oh no! the mooon is where i keep my powers. I’m in Egypt trying to find Rhoda and Luna and looming around as a wolf.
PS. on the news people are saying that native Egyptians have been seeing something like a reencarnation of Wepwalet.(wikipedia it)
178-What’s Wepwalet? An ancient Egyptian god?
Dear Merle and Miriam,
I am in Venice. I thought we would be safer seperate, but having thought it over, I have changed my mind and will join you as soon as possible. Please tell me what hotel you are staying at. Together, we are going to be more powerful.
-John SmithsonianActually, I checked into a different hotel so we could still write letters to each other.
For the record, I’m traaped undergraound
180- Really? How’d that happen? Besides the fact that all of New York City is trapped underground.
wikipedia wepwalet. He is an Egyptian wear god in the form of a wolf.
182- It didn’t bring up any hits. Are you spelling it wrong?
(183) Try “Wepwawet.”.
184- I tried, “Egyptian gods” and looked through the list. He’s an Egyptian wolf/jackal-god of war.
Hedge, if you’re a werewolf, do you only transform in the full moon? Because if you do, you have got to stop transforming so much. There are only twelve full moons in a year, you know, and this thing ought to span a good deal less than a year. Maybe after you got the hang of it, you could transform at will?
I’ll be gone for the next few days, just so you know.
Also, we are now headed toward the moon, a journey that will conveniently, and completely coincidentally, take the same amount of time as my absence.
186- *voice dripping with sarcasm* I bet it’s coincidence.
Alice I can transform into a wolf whenever I widh, but generally have to when there is a strong souorce of magic or the full moon. I have been transformed of my own will and I’m roaming egypt
185- More if there’s a blue moon.
189- But there’s only been one blue moon this year, and it’s not enough to make up for the many times he’s become a wolf.
John Smithsonian,
We are at the View-of-the-lagoon hotel in Venice. There actually is a lagoon, but you can’t see it. Please join us. I’m not sure what we can do to weaken the evil one. We need a plan.
MIriam.
We still write letters, in a way. We are in separate rooms, so we leave notes for each other.
Hmmmm. My comment: zapped orc eaten? Or it might seem to be eateen, then get through, sparking much bewilderment…
191- Is that related to View-of-the-Sea in Dallas?
alice i transform all full moons and when i want to or if there is strong msgic near me
194-You said that already.
195- I was confused. Thanks, Hedge!
np
Hey, guys,
I’m sorry I’ve been gone so much, but I’ve been majorly busy, lately…I’ll catch up tomorrow, as soon as I can!
~/Shadowkat/Lsyor/The Amazing Moi
doont forget perwson with the samec bday as hedgehogboy5
Hedge,
Will you please go to Venice and find all of the Empowered? I do not seem to be able to contact them – I sent a letter, but have received no replies. Tell them that they must stay underground. No evil can come to them there. Also, while Tut, Rhoda and I are traveling, Tut will not have his mind on New York. If you could, talk to the trees and ask them to start rebuilding the city and underground tunnels and save the people of New York.
–Luna
Why did the italics stop halfway through the letter? Hmm. I don’t think I stopped the italics, or at least I didn’t mean to… *ponders HTML*
[You didn’t restart them after “must.” It’s fixed now. –ReB]
193- Probably.
GAPAs, did you zap my comment? Please put it in if you got it… I don’t see reason to zap it. Oh well…
Dear Merle and Miriam,
I checked into the View-of-the-lagoon Hotel in Venice. We do need a strategy if we are going to defeat the Evil One. I assume that Rhoda and Luna will go to the moon with Tut, but what will happen then? How will we get a letter to them if we need to contact them? What should we do? Please try to come up with a plan-I will do the same.
-John Smithsonian.
Hmmmmm… This thread is a lot slower than normal. Where is everybody? I don’t normally go on this thread on my second MB turn of the day and find that no one has posted since my last post.
204- I’m not sure what to say.
Dear Luna,
I am in Egypt scouting around. It is amazing what I can find. I find many things pertaining to the empowered. I was trying to find you and Rhoda. I followed you through the hole. I will ask Edal to find the other empowered in Venice. I believe he may be empowered because he has an amazing nack for electronic devices and can hack any system.
-Hedge
Dear Edal,
enclosed is a letter from Luna. I want you to do what she tells me to do in the letter.
(201) – Thanks!
204, 205 – I’ve noticed that too. For the last few days, there hasn’t been much going on. Oh well…it should pick up again once everyone’s out of school. Or maybe it won’t, because everyone will be going on vacation and such. Hmm…
207- It’ll be faster when PC comes back and we get to the moon.
Also, no one’s written to me or all of the Empowered, and I have nothing new to say, since this journey to the moon is very quiet.
I’m very sorry that I haven’t come here for so long. Once I catch back up with the new posts, I’ll try and contribute some more.
209-Is there a way to contact you? If you’re on the way to the moon, a letter couldn’t reach you… Right? Okay, I don’t have much to say…
207-I won’t be going on vacation untill August.
Sorry. Not much happening over here. I’m too tired for plotting.
I am back, and we have reached the moon.
Master,
I will be reporting on our progress shortly.
Let’s hope things pep up now that Rhoda, Luna, and Tut are on the moon.
Dear Empowered (trapped underground),
I am coming through my Mirror, now, to find you. As soon as I do, we’ll all head for the moon…we will have to wait until night-time, though, so that I can see it…I’ve never been there…. Anyway, please be ready when I come. Thank you!
~Lsyor
Can i like find something anchient that shoots me to the moon in Egypt
Dear Miriam and Mr. Smithsonian,
We ought to discuss our abilities and what we are likely to be able to accomplish. I have the ability to walk on winds through worlds and occasionaly talk to birds however I’m not sure how this would transfer to fighting. What are your abilities? What do you propose we do? Should we ask for more help?
Merle
Person with same b-day as I–Well…um, you could send me a letter, or something, and the other Empowered and I could pick you up and take you with us…that would be more plausible.
Dear Empowered,
It is amazing up here. The earth is so tiny and far away, and everything is a luminous white. We bounce when me move even slightly. It is great fun, or would be, if there weren’t more pressing matters, namely, the Crystal. And that strange matter of food – lack of it. No one else seems to need to eat. I do, but there is no food up here. Ah well. Soon we will be down on earth again.
Looking at the earth from up here, I can see a strange haze around Europe, probably near Italy. Is it the Evil One?
– Rhoda
Dear Moonchild,
Drakesinger has made us a small base about five miles from where you are. Speak to the Moon now, and ask it to reveal the Crystal. Our base will descend into the crack, and we will continue to widen it.
Tutankhbastet.
Dear Rhoda,
Tutankhbastet has just asked me to begin speaking to the moon. I have been speaking to it a lot lately – and it has seemed to be quite responsive. If all has gone as I have asked, the crack in the crystal is almost completely healed. There is no way Tutankhbastet can get to the crystal without me, and only me, opening up the moon for him. If I do not “succeed” in revealing the crystal, there is absolutely no way he can get it. He can’t blow it up or use any destructive force, because if the crystal is not revealed, there is nothing that can break the moon’s protective barrier. It will also be extremely difficult for him to destroy the crystal if there is no crack. Perhaps I will reveal the crystal when the crack is completely closed, then it will be almost impossible to destroy it. Then we can bring up the other Empowered, and destroy Tutankhbastet – or at least threaten to, because he would be one against at least 10 or so.
–Luna
Merle,
I can get into peoples minds with a song, and normally heal them. I could try and sing something harmful and destructive, but I really don’t think that that would work. I’m only going to be of help after the fighting, because I can heal the injured. I’m sorry. I think that we need to get more help.
Miriam.
Luna,
I know precisely what you are doing, and I order you to stop healing the crystal. Your oath binds you. If you don’t carry it out, Madspin can snap your mind like a twig. Then your powers and form will be left as an empty shell for me to manipulate.
Tutankhbastet
Dear Merle,
In Tut’s words, my powers are “knowledge of buried and hidden things, and striange, unpredictable, but alwayd accurate visions.” I won’t be much help fighting Tut. I don’t think that would be a good idea, anyway, because Tut is very powerful, and has the corrupt Empowered on his side. We would be doomed.
-John Smithsonian
Dear Tutankhbastet,
Unfortunately for you, I never made an oath. You made Rhoda take an oath, but you somehow forgot to bind me as well. The crystal is completely healed now, and without me it will be almost impossible for you to access the crystal. I have now made myself a spirit, and have evaporated back to Earth. There is no way you can hurt me, because I, along with all the rest of the Empowered, are shielded with such a strong force, that you alone cannot break it. You’ll just have to find another way to destroy the Earth. Good-bye, Tutankhbastet, I hope to see you on the good side soon.
–Luna
PraCan — just a note – this has nothing to do with Alice/Rhoda, so don’t think she is “good” too. She didn’t make the decision to reveal her good-ness to you, and I don’t want my actions to alter her ideas for her character. Oh, and about the Oath – it’s completely true. I don’t know how, but you never made me take an oath like Alice. Correct me if I’m wrong…
Dear Rhoda,
Tutankhbastet caught me healing the crystal, but I was in luck. I completely healed the crystal, and put a special charm on it so it is nearly impossible to break. He is probably going to try and find another way to destroy the Earth, so keep a good ear, and eye, out for his plans. I created a strong shield which is now draped over all the Empowered, and I am now in semi-hiding. I never made an oath with Tutankhbastet, so I am free to go, but I urge you to keep following in his poisonous footsteps. I don’t know what will happen if you break your oath, but I do not think it will be good.
Best of luck, Rhoda!
–Luna
Dear Luna,
Somehow, up here on the Moon, I have not tried to switch Tutankhbastet. Perhaps it is because he is well-protected, or perhaps there is some other reason, but whatever the reason, I have not yet tried. I am not sure that I can anymore, for the Moon is sapping my strength. I hope that we go back down soon, as it is, I don’t know what I would do if Tutankhbastet discovered that I was not truly on his side. I certainly wouldn’t be able to use my powers in this state. I couldn’t break my oath if I tried, even in a good situation, which this is not. It is very strong, despite the fact that I left out the Evil One. One bonus is this: Tutankhbastet cannot use my powers for evil.
– Rhoda
Luna-
Very good. I applaud your resourcefulness. As such, I will attempt to find a way to preserve your spirit when you shatter the Crystal. Don’t act so surprised. You’ll see things my way soon.
Tutankhbastet.
Rhoda-
Switch Moonchild.
Tutankhbastet.
Guys- Maybe I’m biased, but it seems like you’re making this way too easy for yourselves. There’s no suspense in a story unless the villain (me) is foiled when he’s inches away from succeeding (about to crack the Crystal.) Sorry if the previous two sentences sounded rude, but I hope you’ll consider my opinion.
Ohh. “Shielded with such a strong force that you alone cannot break it.” I’ll just have to call in reinforcements, then, won’t I.
Master,
It is imperative that I receive backup immediately. Moonchild is more powerful than I thought. Fortunately, Elderseventh is even more so, and is switching her.
Tutankhbastet
Luna-
I know you will find this letter, as it is tied to a chunk of moon rock which will draw you to it. Elderseventh is trying to switch you as you read this. She will probably fail. Your power, hers, her oath, and her conscience will all pull in opposite directions on her psyche. Have you ever seen a soul shatter? Like impossibly bright shards of glass pouring out of the chest. It’s extraordinarily painful, and more than that, the fragments of her spirit won’t be able to reach Otherlife. They’ll just drift around as ghosts of agony for eternity.
If you have even a scrap of friendship for Rhoda, I suggest you reconsider your position.
Tutankhbastet
I want to just blast out of nowheere when tut is about to crack the crystal and throw him into the hole or sometyhing
Dear lsyor,
Can you bring me to the moon? I want to help stop tut and if I am correct I beleive I will be amazingly strong on the moon since it is thwe center of my power.
-Hedge
I could also fall in so I could die saving the empowerednsuch
227- Hmm, maybe you’re right. I don’t want the story to be over quickly, which is good, because, I just made myself unable to disobey you, and therefore I have to switch Luna. Unfortunately (or fortunately), because my power is severely depleted, I can’t switch Luna without nearly killing myself. And I think that maybe I will forget the trees and how necessary they are to me, and that will make it hard for everyone, but especially me.
Tutankhbastet,
My power is waning and I don’t know why. I don’t think I can switch Moonchild, not without killing myself. But I cannot go against the oath, either, so unless you revoke the order, I will die. Please, PLEASE, Tutankhbastet, withdraw the order!
– Rhoda
Oh cool! I get to be a ghost of agony. Several ghosts of agony.
Rhoda-
I will not withdraw the order. However, I do remember from your letters earlier on that you had a strong connection with trees. Drakesinger is bringing a large forest, complete with atmosphere, up to the Moon. That will augment your power enough for you to switch Moonchild.
Tutankhbastet.
228 (PraCan) – I said “alone,” because I figured that was what you’ll do. I didn’t want you to be foiled too easily, but I do want to go back down to Earth and help the others. So I fixed the problem – for the moment – and gave you an opportunity to make another. Is that okay?
Dear Rhoda,
Why do I feel so weak? I have made it down to Earth, but ever since I disobeyed Tutankhbastet, I feel like I have no strength. With my power waning, I fear the Crystal’s safety. Please tell Tutankhbastet I am sorry, and contact the other Empowered.
I am ever so tired…my thoughts are blurring…everything seems so faint and far away.
–Luna
Dear Luna,
Tutankhbastet has asked me to switch you. I don’t want to switch you, but I cannot go against the oath. Apparently I have a strong connection with trees, ((Yeah, I forgot about the trees. This is fun, though.))and Tutankhbastet has given me a forest here. It is enough to restore my powers, but I still cannot resist the oath. I tried. I failed painfully. I do not want to explain the details, but as I am writing these words, it is resisting the oath and prolonging the dreadful deed, and it hurts. I can’t write much longer. I am so sorry, Luna, both for you – you will soon be switched – and me – I will be without an ally. But I can’t help it. I am sorry.
-Rhoda
How are we going to get out of this one? Someone should say whether or not it worked pretty soon. If it didn’t, I have ideas. If it did, I still have ideas.
So basically, something is very wrong with Luna, Rhoda is totally powerless against Tutankhbastet and about to be shattered into hundreds of ghosts of agony, the rest of the Empowered are clueless as to these desperate plights, and Tutankhbastet is gaining the upper hand in general. This is definitely more fun than anything that’s happened so far.
Is Luna’s problem because she disobeyed Tut? They’re slightly conflicting, my pain from resisting the oath, and her tiredness at disobeying Tut. Maybe it’s a different sort of spell. Perhaps Tut is trying to hinder her in whatever she would do in the service of the good?
I think it might be fun to go evil. But I don’t know. I wouldn’t want to be evil for very long if I was at all. But remember how you couldn’t switch Tutankhbastet? That reason might be the same reason why you can’t switch me, if you don’t want to switch me. I’ll let you decide whatever you want to do. If you want to switch me, just let me know when I’m switched, and I’ll switch. PraCan, what do you think?
I think we should go o the moon and have an epic battle, and I should push myself and (if its ok with PC) Tut into the crack. If Tut doesnt come with me he may turn bac cause he realises he just led a great person to their doom.
238- I don’t want to switch you. But it’s kind of a lose-lose situation. I can switch you, which will lead to the downfall of the Eight Worlds, and live (for a little while), or I could not switch you, and die, leading to the downfall of the Eight Worlds. Or I could fail to switch you, die in agony, the Empowered could go through a complicated ritual to bring me back to life or at least to the sort of life that Luna has.
Yeah. Well, I’m going to a party, so please don’t do anything crucial without me.
238- I think that you should switch, but before you do, warn the other Empowered. Elderseventh’s soul will shatter, and you will begin to crack the Crystal, but the rest of the Empowered will attack the Moon. A huge battle between Pure and Corrupt Empowered will ensue. Jewelhawk or some other healer will put Elderseventh’s soul back together, the faint remnant of good in me will telepathically order Elderseventh’s ghost to switch me back, and Moonchild and I will switch and heal the Crystal just as it is about to split in half.
Suspenseful climax, anyone?
Okay. I’ll switch, and before I do, I will tell the Empowered that I am doing so. Elderseventh will, essentially, die, but she will still be in the story, right? (I don’t want to make Alice leave the story, so maybe she can have some sort of being other than her soul. Oh! Maybe, the trees [I guess, Jewelhawk too?] collect her shattered soul and mend it, and Rhoda becomes a tree. Then, in that form, she can still do stuff. I don’t know. It depends on how soon and in what form Alice wants to be in the story. Alice?) So during the battle, I’ll be bad, but then just when Tut and I are going to crack the crystal, Elderseventh turns us back and we’re all happy. Then all we have to do is destroy the Evil One. Okay, I think I get it.
Sounds good! Let’s wait for Alice…
Right! I’d rather be a ghost than a tree, merely because a ghost is more mobile, but being a tree would be cool too. Maybe I can be made a ghost, but the trees put so much of them into me that I have several tree-ish traits. But maybe that’s too much. This is going to be so much fun . . . I think I’m going to enjoy dying. I can make it very dramatic. Wait, no I can’t. Someone else will have to make it dramatic for me, or at least convey a sense of drama, without dramatic wording, because I will be DEAD.
Anyway, see you in the morning.
wooooo i kuv big climactic battle scenes!
243 – Okay. So I’ll send a letter out to all the Empowered (not right now…a little later, when I have more time), and then I will be turned evil. I (or someone else, if they want,) will write a letter to Tutankhbastet, or ‘master,’ describing how your soul shattered. Then, maybe, the trees and Jewelhawk can put your soul back together, but you won’t take the form as a tree…you’ll just be a regular old ghost-type-thing, just like Luna.
This is going to be fun!!
I can heal Rhoda! I’m good with souls….
Maybe we can defeat the evil one down here, which would release tut from being evil at the critical moment… Tell me when you have a plan.
Don’t worry, I’m here…ready to heal people, as long as I can get to the moon…
246- But if you defeat the Evil One now it will be so short! We’ve barely just begun. I don’t want it to end yet.
Dear all Empowered,
I fear this may be the last letter I send you while in a good state of mind. Rhoda is bound to Tutankhbastet by an oath, and she is forced to do his bidding. He ordered her to turn me evil, so I am afraid there is nothing I can do. Her power, combined with Tutankhbastet’s, is too strong for me to handle. While switching me, her soul will shatter. It does not look good. So in a few hours I will be evil, and she will be dead. I am sending this letter to warn you of me, because I will no longer be able to be trusted. Do not listen to anything I say. Rhoda’s death will break her bond with Tutankhbastet, so if any of you can gather some trees and combine your magic, you may be able to put her soul back together. Empowered, this is a call for help. You must heal Rhoda, and stop me from destroying the Crystal. Please save her so she can change me and Tutankhbastet.
Good luck, and farewell
–Luna
I am dead. How exciting.
250 – is it fun?
Oh, and I accidentally posted this on the Kokonvention thread, (at the end of a long-ish post), and I must have forgotten what thread I was on by then. Or something like that. But anyway, this is what I said:
“Oh, and by the way, I’m leaving for Mexico on the 20th and not coming back until July 4th…that’s 2 weeks. What is going to happen to the story then?”
251- Oooh, good point. Ouch. Two weeks is a long time to be without the story, but I don’t see what we can do but pause it. Or else we could just slow it waaaaay down, because Luna is an absolutely essential character, and we can’t do anything without her, really. I mean, the Empowered on earth can still do stuff, but it’ll be a lot slower since we can’t switch Luna till you’re back. Rubea and Miriam could find and heal Rhoda, I guess.
I asked Lsyor to take Merle, Miriam, and I to the moon. Has she done it, Shadowkat? If she has, I will maybe write another letter to one of my ex-correspondents(My brother Jim and my friemd Mike Smith) and tell them about it. Or send a letter to another Empowered, prefrebly one on the moon. I know that Luna is bad, and Rhoda is dead. And Tut is bad. So theirs no one on the moon except evil peiople and a dead body. Hmmm. So Luna will be out of the story from June 20th to July 4th. Hmmm… Luna is an essential charecter, so we will have to pause it, or at least make it miove rellly slow. Ooooh, a solution. Purple Panda, will you have internet access while in Mexico?
SOMEONE SAVE ME!!!!!!
254- Sorry, I can’t. I’m dead.
255 – lol
256- Precisely. If I never came back to life, I could still sit here commenting on how dead I am, which is what makes it fun.
It seems kind of weird for me to be writing lots of letters in a row, so I’m going to wait for someone else to write something before I do again.
Some of the Empowered need to write letters to each other saying that they have put Rhoda back together, so Alice can participate in the story again.
And I don’t think I’ll have internet access in Mexico. If I do, I would be EXTREMELY lucky, and I would probably have to pay a lot of money for it. So it doesn’t look good…
258-Dang. So we’ll be without Luna for 2 weeks. That is a long time. Hmm.
Dear Lsyor,
Merle, Miriam, and I are in the view-of-the-lagoon hotel in Venice. Please come and take us to the moon. Will we be able to travel through your mirror? If we can’t, how long will it take to get to the moon?
Rubea,
Can I meet you somewhere so that we can heal Rhoda together? We must find the shattered pieces of her soul, and then reassemble it. I believe that together we can make it happen. Thank you.
Miriam.
Tutankhbastet,
I need help getting back to the moon. I’m not sure how, but I was interrupted from my crystal-speaking, and transported back to Earth. ((Yes, the switch from good to bad caused some memory slips)) While I’m down here, awaiting my rescue, I shall try and locate some of the Empowered and capture them.
–Luna
I don’t think I’m going to be very good at this, but I guess I’ll get better with practice…
261- Luna,
Drakesinger will arrange your transportation. Watch for a comet in the sky. When you see it, close your eyes and whisper your true name eight times. Then open your eyes. You will be in the Bower (a dome of magic that encloses a forest on the Moon and serves as our base.)
Tutankhbastet
Hello? Shadowkat? Where are you?
Sorry, guys, I couldn’t access my computer this weekend.
Dear Miriam,
My flight from Dublin to Venice just landed. I will try to find you. When I do, I hope you will have some way to get to the moon.
Rubea
Dear Rubea,
We are in the View-of-the-Lagoon hotel in Venice. Lysor is picking us up in her mirror.
Miriam.
Are we on the moon yet?
No. Lysor hasn’t replied yet.
SAVE ME!!!….
268- Like I said, I’m dead. Can’t save you.
268 – I would, but there is a big problem: I’m evil now.
And…I’m leaving tomorrow for 2 weeks. Take care of the story while I’m gone!! *wishes luck*
–Purple Panda
370- At the rate the story is going, not much will happen while you’re gone. I’m dead, Tut isn’t around, you’re evil and leaving.
And I… and I… once I get to the moon, will live on the moon as a wolf before theirs an epic battle!
This story is at an all-time low.
Ha, guess what!! My character is trapped in NY, which is exactly where I am now!! On nvacation in NY!! (Which gave me the strange idea of seeing Hanjjvar on a street corner…)
This is wierd…I keep adding letters to words when I type…
274- I can imagine . . . Do you look oddly at every person wearing a costume that vaguely resembles his in any respect? Do you hold your breath when you walk past a gargoyle? (Are there any gargoyles in New York?) Because that is totally the way I would act. Stories are eerily real for me.
Oh good I didn’t miss any of the story while I was gone.
hanjjvar has to SEND A LETTER for someone to save him before someone does.
Dear any Empowered,
If you find this, then know that I am trapped underground in New York. Please help me!
~hanjjvar
I think that it’s ok to have the story moving slowly for a while. Until Luna gets back. We shouldn’t really do anything big without her, because that isn’t fair.
to: teh empoewred
from: John Deo
re: aag i cant Hel’p
~I don’t have much tiime to type i was I;m being held hostage adn i can’t help os I need and i’m in the and tutankhbas~
280- Yeah.
281- WHAT? Translation, please? Of course I, being dead, don’t know what it says anyhow.
I on saturdasy am going to san diego for a week.
I have been itching to edit this for ages. Now I can finally get around to it, so long as I don’t forget how like last time. (Well, actually, I did forget how I was going to make all the full moons work.) Don’t worry, I won’t touch anything from the characters, just add dates, capitalize things, check spelling, and occasionally cut or add something from one of my letters. I may also post a letter on here, along with something i want explained, and the Museblogger that has control of that character can explain. Also, I am going to make that business letter to Hedge look more business-y. Hedgehogboy, please give me the last names of Edal and Hedge? Please?
to: the good emphowerd
from: john Doe
re: i’ll tr y
~I’ll try and hel[po you guys but I don’t know Ifg I can beca~
Wow. This thing been around for four months story-time.
Month 1
Many letters are written, a few people discover their Empowered status.
Month 2.
Most everyone goes to Dallas, Tut goes bad. Miriam and Merle are in Venice.
Month 3.
Dallas is destroyed, we move to New York, we confer with Tut.
Month 4.
We go to the moon, those of us that do. I die, and Luna goes bad.
We need to wait for Purple Panda! This isn’t the way it should go! We’re speeding up now she’s gone, not slowing down! Argh no!
Here’s a goal. Until she gets back, we cannot go beyond 300 posts.
When will Purple Panda get back?
189- Ah. . . Hmm . . . No later than the third, I think.
I am trying to put dates in probably places, and keep Hedge’s transformations on the full moons. I will post the date that the story is at when I am done, and I would like it if hedgehogboy5 payed a little more attention to the full moons. Some of these letters travel really fast.
I WROTE THE LETTER; SVE ME ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
292- Purple Panda won’t be back until the third (of July.) You have to accept the fact that the story is slow right now. Besides, very few people are in a position to help you. Luna is bad, I am dead, John Doe is in some strange predicament that none of know of because we can’t read his posts (and besides E2MB is on vacation) Lsyor isn’t writing right now, Hedge is in Egypt, and everyone else is in Venice.
I’m here (for about 10 more minutes), but I’m out of inspiration.
How about all of you lovely peoples move over to the Pie isle thread?
Sorry I’ve been gone for a few days. I’ve been sick.
Good idea, Alice. But we are near 300 posts so always THINK LONG BEFORE SUMBITTING and don’t post without at least one letter in the post. Agreed?
Sorry about this, but how about in future, if you are going away, arrange with someone else to take over your character in that time? Then we can keep it moving!
Great!
297- It doesn’t really seem fair, though. We’re not stopping because Luna (and now John Doe) aren’t able to do anything, we’re stopping because we don’t want to do anything crucial without Purple Panda.
In tut’s letters to hedge far back it says that i have to transform on full moons, but vcan turn on other times. omn his list of powers, vit says “can turn into a wolf”
srry forv double post, (and now triple) but the eaqson im posting b now is i have a comp and internet access here at san diego! WOOOOO!!!! ummmm… about names… Edal is like a cyborg, so doesnt know his real lkast name, he cant remmeber anything since sergury, and if you mudst give him a last name, youe could say Sparks or something. anyone have an idea for hedge?
301- You have to have a last name, yes. How about Hedge Atwoods? And Edal Sparks. It works. But one thing this thing has is problems. For example, if the hospital is sending letters to Hedge, who is a thirteen-year-old orphan who lives in the woods, they must know about him, and one thing I’ve learned is that if a kid lives all alone and a grown-up knows about it, they aren’t too happy.
But I guess they don’t have to know that he’s a kid, or that he lives all alone.
Lsyor went back to X to save her own people…she might come back, someday, if the story’s not over, by then…right now, she’s preoccupied with way too much, doesn’t even know what’s going on, here, anymore (because she wasn’t on for a while), and is extremely sorry for the inconvenience. She also gives virtual choklit to everyone still here, and wishes them the best of luck in their writing. Ciao!
303- Shadowkat, you can’t! :lookofhorror: We need you! You’re too enmeshed in this story to quit now!
302: atwoods sounds good. Hedge lives with his mad uncle. His uncle lives in the attic of his house. Hedge fakes calls from his uncle and letters from his uncle to make people think he is iin perfect health. Hedge knows nothing of his uncle’s doings in the attic.
i have an idea and if you agree i want you to say that here. I think Hedge’s uncle should be a human Watcher like the ones in Marvel. He knows nearly eveything, and knows about the profecie and everything. But being a mere human, the burden of knowing so much has turned him partly mad though his mind is sane. He mumbles a lot.
305- Nothing that’s already been done, please. “Like the ones in Marvel” sounds awfully suspicious.
304-Yes! Without Lsyor Merle, Miriam, and John Smtihsonian won’t be able to reach the moon!
305: meh… wikipedia em. it just resembles them. he doesnt have a bloated head or live up in space like them.
Okay, but don’t call him a watcher or anything. Considering that he’s stayed out of the story so far, it won’t be hard to leave him out for the rest.
304-Really? I thought my character had lost so much of the story that she was pretty much dead…alright, fine, I’m back!!! But all this letter-writing is kind of annoying…
From: *~Lsyor~*
To: All Empowered (who are still good)
Re: Rhoda
-My friends, I would first like to apologize for my prolonged absence from Earth, but I was…detained…on my home planet. Secondly, it has come to my attention that Rhoda’s soul has been shattered, and Luna, poor girl, has gone to the Evil (Good twist, by the way, you guys! I wasn’t here for it.). I tell you now that I’m going to stick it through to the end, this time, no matter what happens. Right now, I’m going to pick up Merle, Miriam, John Smithsonian, and, I believe, Rubea, and take them to the moon, where we will meet up with the rest of you. Until then, may Lady Luck be with you!-
Lsyor arrives in the View-of-the-Lagoon Hotel via her mirror. Miriam shows her a picture of the Moon, and Lsyor says, “Alright, now, in order for this to work, everyone must hold each others’ hands and think of the Moon, and only the Moon, until we are through. Now, hold hands, and clear your mind of everything but the Moon.” She grabs Miriam’s hand, and the others join together. “Is everybody ready?” They nod, eyes closed. “Good…here we go!” Lsyor’s Mirror shows the Moon, and opens up to create a swirling vortex with the Silver Orb at the Center. Lsyor tugs on Miriam’s hand, and they all glide, ghost-like, through the Mirror. They are on the Moon.
310- Thank you!
311-Lol…no problem!
293 – John Doe’s e-mails are legible! Just because they’re fragments and have a few typographical errors doesn’t mean you can’t read them!
from: John Doe
to: the empowered who have not abandoned this desperate cause yet
re: Here’s what’s going on
~Phew! Now I can actually type properly! The thing is, Tutankhbastet is trying to use my powers to get rid of you and I’m trying to use them against him but it’s difficult. Tutankhbastet has so much WHAT THE]!@$ds;/59%qf,~
313- Okay, okay. We haven’t abandoned this desperate cause yet, we just had to slow down because Luna is gone.
314 – I know. But we’re over 300 posts, so I thought it would be time for a new thread.
315- Let’s wait till Purple Panda is back. A new thread brings a burst of new activity, and that’s the last thing we need. Besides, if we had a new thread, then more people would want to join, and I need her to help me reinforce the rules of joining.
310-WHAT ABOUT MEEEEEEEEEEEE…. *sob*
Merle,
I and Rubea have reconstucted Rhoda’s soul. She is now walking this moon again. However, I fear that Tutankhbaset may soon learn of her revival. I think that is in the interests of us all for you, me and Rhoda to walk in the other world for a short time. If Tutankhbaset is unaware of our exsistance, then we have the chance of a surprise attack. I am going to take us their now, so we can be safe for a while. We can return if we are desperatly needed. I and Rhoda will see you in the other world.
Miriam.
Rhoda, is that Ok? You’re alive and with us in the other world. I really do think that this is best for now. Tut doesn’t know I exist, or Merle, and he thinks you are dead. It will be to our advantage.
317- Look, Hanjjvar. We will rescue you sometime. But it has been, oh, 25 days since you sent your first letter. Most of the Empowered are in Venice or Egypt or even further away, and no one knows where the cave is.
318- Yay! I’m not technically alive; I’m a ghost actually, but that’s better than being utterly dead. Now we can rescue Hanjjvar while waiting for Luna.
Dear Empowered,
You cannot imagine how painful it is when your soul shatters. Such a deep pain! And it does not stop when your soul has shattered. It lingers on, though all consciousness has vanished. Do not swear an oath to Tutankhbastet! Speaking of the oath, I am unsure as to whether or not I am truly free of my dreadful binding promise. When I swore, I said that I would serve Tutankhbastet until my soul was extinguished. It was not extinguished; it was shattered. My present state does not show in mirrors, so I do not know whether the mark of my oath is still on my forehead.
But I cannot die again, and that in itself means a certain immunity to the oath. I do not think that I shall be controlled by Tutankhbastet anymore.
Where is everyone? What has been happening while I was dead? I have missed all the letters sent in my absence.
– Rhoda
Now we wait for Purple Panda.
Yes we do. I’m totally lost.
shadowkat you forgot meeeee!!!
I’ll put in hedges uncle but ill wait for ocmmments before i put a letter from him out.
323- You weren’t in Venice. She didn’t forget you; she just didn’t pick you up. I think.
Re: Hedge’s uncle. If you put him in, he has to be totally original. No copying.
Dear al empoerd,
I mut rite quikly: Mi pen i s fallng sve mee! i CAn zfill it! the Eart s angri!
~hajvr
((That was on porpuse))
325- So you’re Stormwatcher now?
Okay, we’ll save you, but we have to wait for Purple Panda. How often do I have to tell you?
well hedges uncle is a reincarnation of Imhotep (egyptian god of wisdom, medicine and magic). He can see over the world and knows nearly everything. He was reincarnated to help the empowered but the combined power of all the dark secrets in the world have overpowered him since the wisdom of imhotep has binded itself to a human. Anyone have an idea on whsat he could do?
327- Not really. But that sounds good.
ok
326: yeah, and yeah yeah.
Oops…sorry, guys. I was only picking up people who I knew for sure I was supposed to. Can you figure out some way to get there, or should I come back for you?
June is almost out, and Purple Panda will be back soon. Let it be until then.
well saturday im going on vacation for a week and wont be able to get on here. try not to do much
333- Summer sucks for this kind of thing. *prays that Purple Panda gets back before Saturday*
When I go on vacation I will let someone else take over my character. I want the story to keep moving.
334-Yep.
Muhuhuhuhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha….
*is pied by overly enthusiastic villain police*
333, 335 – Noooooooo!!!!!!! Too many people are going on vacation!
Btw, I regret to inform you I will be gone from July 12 to July 15, and July 22 to August 4. I know, it really sucks.
337-A little bit sugary, aren’t we?
337- Oh, very nice. You do spend a good portion of your time being pied by police of some sort, don’t you?
I will be mostly unavailable from July 15 to July 19.
Well, it seems to me that we have two options. Either we can:
a) just put this thread on hold until September.
or
b) when we go on vacation, let another person who is staying take over your character for a short period of time.
There’s not much else we can do.
341- Or just live with the fact that it is painfully slow.
Yay! Thanks for waiting everyone! I just got home, about half an hour ago, or sometime around then. And, as I have said on many other threads, I basically forgot how to use a computer, and am very shocked by civilization. Because I have been living in thatch-roof huts for almost a month, and, well, yeah..
So, I’ve read the thread, and thanks a million (times a zillion) for waiting for me! I guess we’re getting a new thread? I don’t think there is much for me to say right now, (Luna, I mean), so I’ll just re-read the thread a few times and think of something.
And thanks again! *hugs everyone*
343- YOU’RE BACK! *dances* Hooray hooray! *is ecstatic* Yay!
Unfortunately, lots of people are going on vacation, so the story will be rather slow for a while. Oh well.
I like the going slow idea rather than having someone else take over your character. So I guess we’ll just stay really really slow until September, and I guess hold off the new thread, too…unless this one gets really bogged down.
345- Me too. No one can take over Rhoda. No one!
But why no new thread? I mean, we’ll just reinforce the Rule, like we did on this thread, and maybe because not many people are around, fewer people will be trying to join.
But I don’t really care.
This thread is getting pretty darn long. Can we have a new one? P*****?
I don’t really care either way. I was just thinking about the same reasons people said earlier – that it would bring a bunch of new people, etc. And we don’t really want any new people, do we? Well, at least not right now, if we want to keep it slow-paced. But I don’t really mind whichever way the GAPAs/we decide.
348- No, we don’t want new people. That may be preventable by putting up several posts that are really the one rule reiterated several times. But that would be kind of mean, too.
I think that the only real reason to have a new thread is, this one is getting really off-topic. It’s been many many posts since anything of real import (save Purple Panda’s return) has happened.
Finally, we can move the story along again! So I am with Merle and Miriam on the moon. Oh, and we can still send letters because we pass notes to communicate, there not being air on the moon.
Well, lets just sort of ignore it until the end of summer
350- Actually, you’re not. Me, Rhoda, and Merle are in the Otherworld were we can practice using our powers and plan and plot without Tut knowing that we exist.
Oh, and, let’s have a new thread in September, and then we will get back on topic.
351- I (Hanjjvar) am from the otherworld.
353- No you’re not. You’re from an alternate world. The Otherworld is more like a place where ghosts go.
I know it’s a style, but when people write in fragments like this: “hel[po you guys but I don’t know Ifg I can beca,” it really takes away from the story. If you don’t have super strong feelings about writing like that, you could get your point across that you’re going fast, or whatever you’re trying to imply by writing like that, another way relatively easily. It just makes it really hard to read, and it’s unprofessional (not that we’re trying to be professional or anything, it just really takes away from the story)
Also, Alice – If you’re editing the story, and I’m editing the story…do you want to work together? (Well, I guess not really, but we could confer and such)
355- Sure, I’d like to work together. Mostly what I’ve done is arrange the letters and put dates on them, to work better with the full moon. I could send you a copy, if you like.
remember alice hedges transformations are pretty much anytime after he goes into the desert and learns how to control it
357- Yes, I know.
Re: Vacations. In really early September, I’m going to be gone for a couple of days, and during that time, I’m not even going to think about computers.
356 – Thanks!
358 – Cool! Where are you going?
359- Somewhere . . . further north. *waves hand vaguely* I honestly don’t know where it is. Near the water, I think. I’m going with my father to see some kayaking people he knows, and they have lots of kids. It will be fun.
In fact, it’s a KAYAKING PARTY! Fun! It will be on the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd of September.
I am alone on the moon with Tut and Luna, both of whom are evil. Okay. But I’m out numbered! *gulp*
162- Indeed. Oh well, we’ll rescue you.
Well I know I took a few people to the Moon, but now, since all this dying and destroying had happened…well…I’m more than a little confused.
Me, Rhoda and Merle are in the other world, where we are learning to use our powers. I’ll write an actual letter now! In the otherworld, we are together, but a bit apart, and we can’t really speak to each other, so we pass notes.
Rhoda,
After much experimentation, I have discovered how to use my powers to their full. I always knew that I could get inside people’s minds and heal them a little with just the power of my mind, but I have found a more potent power. If I sing the right song, I can fully enter a being’s mind and do whatever I please with it. I can heal and sooth, but I also have powers that could be to our advantage. I can confuse minds, send beings to sleep, and even take full control of their bodies, and mark them permently with me essence, which controls their mind, even when I am not in them. This last takes much effort though, and I will only use it if it is truly needed. I am not alive physically any more, but I fear that it would kill my soul. I would not be able to return to any form of life, except a wind, or breeze. I will sing this song, however, if it is to defeat the evil one, or one of his minions, if destroying this evil while help the empowered and the world.
Miriam
In the big climatic battle I will die forever. I want to. It doesn’t make sense for us all to come out alive. Maybe I will use it before the battle to destroy one of the evil one’s most powerful allies. How about, I confront Madspin, and destroy him. Oh! I’ve got it. Is it ok with everybody if Madspin comes to the other world, because he is the only corrupt empowered besides Luna who can do that, and tries to destroy us, because the evil one has tracked Rhoda? I defeat him, and soon the battle begins. Someone else defeats the main people.
Ok? If no one disagrees, we can describe it tommorow, before anyone else goes away. I’m not trying to make myself seem like a hero or anything by volunteering to die, I just really feel like dying. One of the more powerful empowered can defeat tut and the evil one.
I will now starve to death.
365- Okay, if you want to die, be my guest. Or don’t. I don’t care. I’m apathetic right now.
Rhoda,
I was walking today when I saw a terrible sight. Madspin, the only corrupt empowered besides Luna who can walk the worlds has been sent by Tutankhbaset to destroy us! I believe he has tracked you. There is only one option left to us. I must enter his body and destroy him. However, I am afraid that this will completely destroy my soul. I will not see you again. Beware of Luna.
Goodbye, my friend. I will watch you.
Miriam.
W00t! I’m dead! W00t! Now someone probably needs to write a letter saying how I’m dead.
368- A tad abrupt? *shrugs* Oh well. You’re dead. Is it nice? I have realized that being alive is more fun.
I’ll the write the letter presently.
Again, Hanjjvar will now starve.
Hanjjvar wants attention. I therefore suggest he does something about his predicament and gets to know some Empowered, because the only person who knows about him is Hedge, who is in Egypt as a wolf. In fact, most everyone is in some far-away place, and no one but Hanjjvar is in New York. (Maybe Rubea, but I don’t think so.) Also, if you starve we will be forced to take you out of the story altogether, because you would have played no part. Soooooooooo . . . DO something! Use your power to escape! I don’t know! But you haven’t played a very big part, and very few people know about you.
Cinnamon Moon – did you want to stop being in the story? You seemed a bit excited… Maybe your death can be a bit more, well, not so abrupt.
372- Yeah. The thing about this story is it goes too fast. I mean, as soon as Koko du Pelle learned what his power was, John Smithsonian had a vision saying that Tutankhbastet was evil.
O.k. If you want to, we can cut that part. I just wanted to do it before I went on camp. (I’m back now)
Dear Empowered,
I have managed to talk to the creatures of the earth, and they have agreed to help me. My abilities have greatly improved, and I am free, and will help to defeat the Evil One.
~Hanjjvar
Could I be able to manipulate the earth and create a Golem sort of thing, ’cause all I really do is talk to animals.
375 (Stormwatcher) – yeah, that would be cool!
Oook…still really confused…help?
377- Maybe if I knew what you were confused about, I could help.
So am I dead or not?
379- Not yet. You should die at a time when we need you more, because right now we’re drifting around practicing our powers, and we haven’t reached the crucial stage yet.
380-So Miriam survived destroying Madspin? Good. Miriam’s allive. But could somebody come to the moon?
381- No, she didn’t destroy Madspin! We just deleted that letter entirely.
I think that if it is needed hedge can sacrifice his body to let out the wolf to destroy a large evil or something.
Hedge Atwoods,
It pains me with every stroke of my pen as i write this, I am not supposed to interfere. But I feel that if I do not intervene there is no hope. You have an amazing strength inside you, as do I. You are even stronger than me as you can somewhat control that strength. You have all the strength of the anchient egyptian god, Wepwawet tucked inside you. Alas, I fear that the sheer strength of Wepwawet would destroy your human form forever if you tried to use it all. But i feel that you can help greatly in the destroying of the Evil one. I cannot sign. Goodbye.
So who exactly wants to stay alive? Cinnamoon and Hedge both want to die. Does anyone want to still be alive at the end of this?
I’ll decide whether or not to die in the end when some people have answered. I’d rather live, honestly, but if everyone decides to kill off their characters, it would be no good to have Rhoda standing at the edge of the battlefield, ghostly and not technically alive, but more alive than everyone else.
Dear Miriam,
I hope against hope it will not come to that. If it does, then there is nothing to be done. I believe that all of us could kill ourselves with our powers, and you at least could accomplish a great deed with it. But in the meantime, be careful! Even here the Evil One can not be far away. Luna would know, were she still on our side.
-Rhoda
I would write to Hanjjvar, but I’m not sure if Rhoda knows of his existence.
Actually, someone has to survive to write the final letter.
384: I dont exactly want to die, but Hedge might have to. And Hedge if he did do that he would just become a sortof spirit, who could transform into a wolf form at times. He just wouldnt have a human body unless a body was made for him.
Should hedges uncle be empowered? If he is, maybe something like NightWatcher?
380- O.k. That’s fine. Maybe we should have a dramatic buildup where tut somehow discovers you, sends someone to re-destroy you, which means that we all have to fight in a big climatic battle, and I can die then?
Sorry. I just really want to die. I don’t mind living if a lot of other people want to die though.
Maybe we just shouldn’t plan when we should die, or if we will, and just let the story take its course? No one really planned that Luna would go evil and Rhoda would die, did they?
Ok. My conclusion is that if the time seems right for me to die, then I will.
That alright with everyone?
385- Oh, and, Tutankhbaset could do that if he won.
386- No, he shouldn’t be Empowered. We have enough Empowered.
387- Sounds good!
378-I had mentioned before that I knew I had taken some people to the Moon, but there was some confusion about that, and who, and…well…can you please tell me who is where, doing what?
390- Sure!
Hedge: Egypt.
Lsyor: Otherworld.
Miriam: Otherworld.
Merle: Otherworld.
Rhoda: Otherworld.
Luna: The moon, Tut’s camp.
Tutankhbastet: ^See above.
John Smithsonian: The moon.
Rubea: The moon.
Hanjjvar: Underground in New York.
John Doe: ?
Whew, we’ve got a lot of characters! I think that’s where everyone is.
Dear Empowered,
I am free! i do not know what happened. I concentrated so hard on the earth just moving away, when suddenly, KAVOOM I was out!
~Hanjjvar
We are all waiting for something to happen. I think Tut might have to make the next move.
393–Yeah.
Gee…Where is everyone??
Where’s Tut?
PraCan! PraCan! Come here now!
396-I actually haven’t seen him anywhere on the Blog in quite a while…but he would’ve told us if he was leaving, right?
On a somewhat similar note…(see July Jam 2)
We really need a new thread.
Whoa…400th post!
398-
Eep!
399- But we can’t go on without Tutankhbastet.
GGGAAAAAAKKK!!!!!!! Must post!!!! BUT WHAT???? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Could someone give me a quick update? I’ve been away for a week, and the only computer I had access to was slower than a tortoise in molasses. A dead tortoise in molasses.
402- We can’t go on without Canix. Therefore, we must wait until he returns. You don’t have to post.
Whoa that was WEIRD! Canix was gone one moment, and back the next! Coincidence? I THINK NOT! (Whatever, Alice.)
Okay, quick update. Miriam and Rhoda briefly talked about their powers being able to kill them, Hanjjvar got out from his underground prison, and Hedge’s uncle wrote him a letter saying that he (Hedge) had great power that could destroy the Evil One. We discussed dying, because it seems that Cinnamoon wants Miriam to die, and Hedgehogboy wants Hedge to die.
403-Nice description. It’s good to know you’re not dead…really!
405-Wait, question! Why am I in Otherworld? I wasn’t there, last I checked…
406- Oh, are you still on the moon? Sorry. Or maybe you’re in Venice. I need to do some sorting-out, clearly.
I can now create golems form earth…Muahahahahah…FEAR ME Tutankhbastet!! (Whos name I can spell by heart.) Ahhhhh…much better all my crazieness has been released…Or has it?? ((Sorry. I’m kinda bored…))
407-No, I’m pretty sure I’m on the moon…don’t worry about it. There’s a lot going on.
Master,
The Crystal has cracked, with the aid of Moonchild. Now its eldritch outer shield has been permeated, we can destroy it through more conventional means. May I suggest flinging it into a small star?
The bad news: The Empowered seem to be figuring out their abilities, even the ones I concealed from them. Stormwatcher has realized his ability to create golems. They seem to be rallying for a final assault. My Empowered will probably be able to defeat them, but we must take all precautions. I strongly recommend sending me Kanjal.
Tutankhbastet
410-Who’s Kanjal? Or is it a secret?
411- Look at post 99 for fAZE’s explanation.
Oooooh, spooky. Lessee… I’ll write later.
45- I dont want hedge to die exactly, but if its nededed he can go out with a final bang
New thread, please! This one has 415 posts!
412-(:lookofhorror:–at PC) Uh oh….
(415) Good point. New thread to the rescue.